Feedback on Draft 2
Positives:
- Very good setting
- Range of shots
- Better costumes than Draft 1
- Good framing
Negatives:
- Running too fast for zombies
- Quite comical
- not enough suspense
- Cuts between Ciaran's POV and Harry banging on wall is confusing
- Ciaran walking slowly kills mood
- Title seems like the end due to slow tempo before it
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